Charlotte was the class member who evaluated my work I personally feel as if she has mentioned all that has to be mentioned and therefore meaning in am unable to comment.
Ben, well done to making a solid start to your foundation portfolio, despite your late entry onto the course. You clearly have a strong ability to produce media products and write in a sophisticated fashion. I am looking forward to seeing your music magazine develop.
You are currently showing that you can work at a Level 3, which means you must now focus on Level 4. In particular you need to focus on this aspects: - Target audience questioning - needs to be more specific to genre. Make sure the questions you are asking will produce valuable data that will ensure your product meets the need of your audience. - When discussing the findings of your research, consider how it has informed your planning. What decisions have you made as a results of what you have discovered? - Your evaluation needs to be MUCH more detailed with more media terminology.
Ben, well done to making a solid start to your foundation portfolio, despite your late entry onto the course. You clearly have a strong ability to produce media products and write in a sophisticated fashion. I am looking forward to seeing your music magazine develop.
ReplyDeleteYou are currently showing that you can work at a Level 3, which means you must now focus on Level 4. In particular you need to focus on this aspects:
- Target audience questioning - needs to be more specific to genre. Make sure the questions you are asking will produce valuable data that will ensure your product meets the need of your audience.
- When discussing the findings of your research, consider how it has informed your planning. What decisions have you made as a results of what you have discovered?
- Your evaluation needs to be MUCH more detailed with more media terminology.